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ChromaLusion
06-05-2005, 06:55 PM
----You are Free----

The sound of nature in the sunlit valley.
A white picket fence gradually transforming into a white wall.
Butterflies blown off their resting spot on a flower.
White knuckle tight.
Gripped onto wrapped leather.
Perspiration.
Adrenaline pumping.
Pupils dilating.
Heart racing.
Hear that baby whine.
Hear that low rumble echo throughout the valley.
Disturbed birds take flight from treetops.
The sound of the machine is louder by the second.
Hearing different tones.
Rubber burning.
Pavement crying.
Tips hissing.
Shifting.
Passing.
Accelerating.
Piercing lights.
Red and blue.
Black and white.
Tone throughout the valley slows.
Full yellow line becomes spaced apart.
The block begins to hush.
Footsteps approach yet adrenaline slows.
Tight grip loosens.
He arrives.
The darkness over your eyes slides downward.
Looking up to the robot.
Ready to take you.
Wanting you gone.
Knowing you can escape.
Inlays of silver.
Below, no plate.
Nothing to identify.
Will you take off?
Will you suffer with the cost?
“You know how fast you were going?”
That sly smirk grows on your face.
Smoke rises!
Squeal with piercing pain!
Pavement cringes.
Slide. Slide. Slide.
Power lines transforms to a thick wall.
Everything a blur.
Happening so fast.
You are free.
Nobody can catch you now.
Nobody.

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My Cobra
06-05-2005, 07:11 PM
DAMN :) I have this on my wall. Another good one :)

ChromaLusion
06-06-2005, 09:58 PM
anybody read this? :-/

Blinkstang
06-06-2005, 10:03 PM
Awesome poem, and I really like the top 2 pics, great job!

mustangfreak123
06-06-2005, 10:47 PM
very cool poem! you seem like a very talented person with your movies and poems, good job :clap:

viciousxstang
06-07-2005, 12:13 AM
i don't know if i understood it right but is it about a forest or acre of land where animals live and the land is being torn down to have a street built on it.

02BlueStang
06-07-2005, 01:00 AM
its about being in a car and experiencing being pulled over by a police officer "blue and red" lights.....

then taking off and knowing that no one can stop you from enjoying that moment in life where you are alone...just you and your stang and no one to stop you

AWESOME POEM....loved it, you've got talent girl :beerchug:

viciousxstang
06-07-2005, 01:02 AM
that makes alot more sense than what i thought.

tweety
06-07-2005, 06:31 AM
Very awesome poem. :devil:

ChromaLusion
06-07-2005, 09:58 PM
its about being in a car and experiencing being pulled over by a police officer "blue and red" lights.....

then taking off and knowing that no one can stop you from enjoying that moment in life where you are alone...just you and your stang and no one to stop you

AWESOME POEM....loved it, you've got talent girl :beerchug:


YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS :clap:


I dunno wtf that forest ish was about but you are right on target. Thank You