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ChromaLusion
04-23-2005, 12:25 AM
Waking up to the morning light peeking through the curtains.
Feeling the warmth grow across your face.

Your body rises up and stretches all the weakness away.
Drink into the morning feeling refreshed and ready to take on any tasks that is thrown your way.

Clothing your body and gripping the key in your hand.
Standing before you the gate to passion.

The rise of the big curtain.
Darkness lies ahead.
Rays of light grow across the body revealing the truth.

Beauty.

Power.

Desire.

The three single words to grow into the mind as the body is completely revealed by light.

Eyes widen. Pulse accelerates just by a simple glance.
What is the excursion going to be?
Letting it wrap around your body as you grip on for dear life.
You are in control.
Hear the roar.
Feel the rage.
See the road that lies ahead.
Smoke rises, as you are your guide down the path to a long lasting trip.

The rays glide over the curves exposing each color.
Dancing on the shell.

Wind whips around the body and left for the next one to come around.
Along all sides of you a single wall.
Pressing down as your shades slip over your eyes.

Nearby souls hear the rumble soar through out the atmosphere yet see so little.
A single blur to them.
So quick yet so beautiful as all the dancing hues flash as it passes by.

The hiss of a Cobra.

By: Stephani



:nailbite: well.. what do ya think?
actually If you don't like it, thats ok by me too. Art is anything you can express yourself through. Writing, Painting, Sketching, Graphic Design, Filmaking... Whatever it is, It's all art.

_eazy_
04-23-2005, 12:32 AM
good ish

Jim03svt
04-23-2005, 12:57 AM
I LOVE that!!!!

nice job Stephanie! :thumbup: :thumbup:

Hmongstang
04-23-2005, 01:00 AM
awsome work

csc
04-23-2005, 10:50 AM
damn, great job. you ever entered any poetry contests or anything?

ChromaLusion
04-24-2005, 12:08 AM
damn, great job. you ever entered any poetry contests or anything?


Actually no I havent. Thought about it a time or two. I write once in a blue moon. But I'm mainly into photography & filmaking.

You can check out them at My Cobra's website & for the Got Stang? Video... well that's on the GS homepage :w00t:

Thanks for the nice comments

csc
04-24-2005, 10:20 PM
Actually no I havent. Thought about it a time or two. I write once in a blue moon. But I'm mainly into photography & filmaking.

You can check out them at My Cobra's website & for the Got Stang? Video... well that's on the GS homepage :w00t:

Thanks for the nice comments

ohh you should at least enter one. i entered one a while back, and came in 2nd or 3rd place cant remember,a nd i always thought my poems sucked!